16 August 2011
Oral Language: WALT explain & present
11 August 2011
WALT explain.
What makes a good explanation...
-An intro that tells about the topic
-Vocabulary that is related to the topic
-Paragraphs with 1 main idea
-correct punctuation
-a great conclusion that sums up nicely
see here
24.8.11
WALT: enfer
Tape dispenser
*You can use it as a paper weight
*It can be an office decoration
*It can hold pencils
*You can use it to build stuff ( e.g paper plane)
You can wrap stuff ( e.g presents)
25.8.11 -
I have been learning to assess my own writing using our writing progress indicator matrix. I used it to self-assess my first piece of writing for this term. Then I discussed it with Miss Matangi-Hulls so I know where I'm at in my writing learning and my next steps. Here is my matrix...
Oral Language: WALT explain & present
11 August 2011
WALT explain.
What makes a good explanation...
-An intro that tells about the topic
-Vocabulary that is related to the topic
-Paragraphs with 1 main idea
-correct punctuation
-a great conclusion that sums up nicely
see here
24.8.11
WALT: enfer
Tape dispenser
*You can use it as a paper weight
*It can be an office decoration
*It can hold pencils
*You can use it to build stuff ( e.g paper plane)
25.8.11 -
I have been learning to assess my own writing using our writing progress indicator matrix. I used it to self-assess my first piece of writing for this term. Then I discussed it with Miss Matangi-Hulls so I know where I'm at in my writing learning and my next steps. Here is my matrix...
2 September 2011 - Goal Setting & Reflections 2011...
23 September 2011: Literacy - WritingWALT explain
Here is our success criteria...
Here is my end of term writing sample...
Click here for a full PDF version of my writing with teacher comments...
Here is a summary of my writing progress this term...
Click here for my full writing progress indicator matrix...